I can only make one small criticism, a very minor one really but one that didn't seem right for the period. At one point you wrote. 'At 9:30 she appro...ched me'. I think that is a modern way of saying the time. Emily more likely would have said, 'At half nine or half past nine.' Just a minor point but as I'm doing Creative Writing too, I thought I should point it out just in case you decide to submit it as a piece of coursework." He grinned and I did too and wondered at the care with which he'd. That was in the past. She had her meds, and her time at Ravenwood, and it had been a very long time since she'd felt... that.The basement window was on the wall behind her, a few feet to her right, partially blocked by a metal shelving unit laden with leftover paint and fishing tackle. The dull light wasn't much, but it was enough to outline familiar objects: washer and dryer, step ladder, disused mountain bikes.Jordan had spent plenty of time down here before, "waiting for laundry" -- really,. More

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