(Mindy) You mean that by over-editing they edit out the raw emotion?(Raven) Yes. over-editing weeds out raw emotion. I once read a simple formula ...or writing/editing that I follow. It works. You write a story three times:1) On the first pass, you write the basic plot.2) On the next pass, add a sentence between every sentence that you've already written. It should be embellishment or exploration of what you've written. This is good for adding dialogue. You also edit as you read. " She began putting on my clothes. This was a new thrill, I thought, getting into her still-warm, black lace briefs, my stiffening cock poking out the top. Next I went for the black bra, and Jennifer gave me a bit of help, standing in my boxers, socks and unbuttoned white shirt, then gave me two little cushions to pad it out. While she buttoned the shirt and put my trousers on, I put on her garter belt and had fun putting on her black fishnet stockings, which felt nice on my bare skin. Jennifer. More

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